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...Away and Back...

I have a place,
A secret place,
Where imagination comes alive

I walk along the river,
Past the big Oak tree,
Through the fallen timber,
And across the raging falls

I come to my place,
And step
Into the circle
The circle of dreams,
Of truths,
Of answers

I feel myself fly,
High and fast,
I fly away,
Away from here
From reality

I soar over mountains,
Rivers,
And oceans

I dive deep and fast,
Into the watery depths
I turn to see the dolphins
As they swim swiftly past,
Frolicking, playing
Chasing and all so happy,
Unaware of tragedies above

The memories nearly
Pull me back,
Back...
To the painful reality

I leap up,
And away from the waves,
Away from the sly memories
As they try to creep back

I soar back to the forests
Soaring high,
Oh, so high,
I peer down
And I fall

I fall,
Hurtling towards the earth
Plummeting, somehow gently
Back down to the dense treetops

I shut my eyes,
Enjoy the free feel,
The wind in my face
As I relax, I slow

Soon I find myself
On a cottony cloud
My dress, soaked,
The gauze barely stirred
By the slight wind flowing by

The damp pulls me down
Again, I tumble along
I rain down with the tears
Of the clouds

At last I lie
In a beautiful
Lush green pasture,
I lie on my back,
Staring up at the clouds
From whence I came

And the memories come,
Flooding back
As I close my eyes
To the tears of both me,
And the clouds

And I return,
Slowly,
Ever so slowly,
Back to reality

I fall into myself,
Back to my bed,
Back to the night,
Back to the silent tears
Flowing like a river down,
Down my cheeks
To pool on my pillow

I have come back,
Back from my fantasy world
My world of no memories
Of no suffering,
Of no tragedy

Back...
To what's real,

Back...
To reality
©2007-2008 ~FelicitySilver
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I was doing a job for a woman who my mom knows and in the middle I started to think..
And this poem came to me..about just how sometimes..I just want to leave, get away from everything. Escape into another world..
Well, tell me what you think.
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~lornac1208:iconlornac1208: Apr 14, 2007, 11:37:19 PM
this poem's kinda long... but it really matches u. =D i really like it.

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In the world of art... nothing is impossible
~FelicitySilver:iconFelicitySilver: Apr 14, 2007, 11:45:43 PM
I know, it's so long ^^;
lol I'm glad you like it!!:aww:

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* * *sometimes the only question left is "why?" * * *
~blue-strawberry:iconblue-strawberry: Apr 15, 2007, 12:17:45 AM
lets you escape with it... great work :+fav: :D

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"do the day and let the day do you"
~FelicitySilver:iconFelicitySilver: Apr 15, 2007, 12:26:50 AM
I'm glad you like it.
I think this is my favorite out of all of my poems right now lol
Perhaps because I just wrote it though.
:aww:

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* * *sometimes the only question left is "why?" * * *
~blue-strawberry:iconblue-strawberry: Apr 15, 2007, 2:43:31 AM
i think its one of your best - definatly! :D :clap:

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"do the day and let the day do you"
~FelicitySilver:iconFelicitySilver: Apr 15, 2007, 3:28:37 PM
:aww: Thank you!
:D

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* * *sometimes the only question left is "why?" * * *
~bleeding-lily:iconbleeding-lily: Apr 20, 2007, 8:58:45 PM
-speechless- i love it. wow...
no matter how far you run, you will have to face your pursuer sooner or later.
heh i think i'm gonna go make that my quote now..
but yeah... its wonderful. -to put it mildly-

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Life isn't always about waiting for the storm to pass...

...Sometimes its about learning to dance in the rain."
~FelicitySilver:iconFelicitySilver: Apr 21, 2007, 11:51:30 AM
lol I'm really glad that you love it :aww:
I like that quote too. It's just so very true. (unfortunately)
:aww: thank you

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* * *sometimes the only question left is "why?" * * *
~bleeding-lily:iconbleeding-lily: Apr 21, 2007, 11:16:07 PM
yeah its always the quotes or songs or poems etc that you wish you didn't get, that just strike a deep chord with you...
if that makes sense??

and your welcome :)

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Life isn't always about waiting for the storm to pass...

...Sometimes its about learning to dance in the rain."
~FelicitySilver:iconFelicitySilver: Apr 22, 2007, 5:25:16 PM
lol yeah, that's true and it makes total sense. I know what you mean...

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* * *sometimes the only question left is "why?" * * *